What is it?!

Bad Bachelor - Stefanie London

So I'm a few chapters in of Bad Bachelor and for some reason, and although I like where the story is going so far, something is rubbing me the wrong way. I cannot point my finger on what exactly it is but there is something that keeps me from loving it. It's obviously important because I'm writing about it and yet...



Ugh! It's driving me nuts not being able to identify the real issue I'm having with it!